Dinner Guests
Dinner GuestsStark raving mad and ravenous,he smiles his twisted smileas he considers havin' usfor dinner in a while.His gossip column's due next weekand needs fresh juicy fare.Delighting in his new...
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Heh. I was going to suggest you call this "The Critic," but that might scare, um, critics away. :-)Enjoyed this. Love the ravenous/havin' us rhyme. I also like the dish/fish internal rhyme in S3 and...
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Thank you Rose for reading and offering your impressions and insight. I see what you mean about L7's meter...will address.L12...actually I meant "cue"...thanks for spotting the goof.I'm glad you...
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Sue: the spring sap of inspiration runneth (oops!) You have been a wonderful crit for me and an example of how to be. Thank you.I love the humour here Hoppy Easter( I love humour anywhere,...
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